I'm joining the Weekend Writing Warriors today to share a snippet of my novel Dance the Dream Awake:
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I was flat on my back when I
came to with Louisa was looking down at me, her eyes like black pools with no
bottom—windows into another time.
“You have something that must
be completed, a loose string that must be tied up and imperative to your
happiness. We cannot talk now, but soon,” she said while closing my eyelids
with the tips of her fingers.
When I opened them again, Nick
was kneeling over me, calling my name and patting my cheek. I raised up on one
elbow and asked, “What happened?”
“The curanderas were drinking
some sort of psychotropic mixture and you barely had a few sips before passing
out.”
“Did you pass out, too?”
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DANCE THE DREAM AWAKE: Romantic Suspense with paranormal elements.
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6 comments:
Ha! Wonder what she missed? Great job painting the scene. Nicely, done :-)
Nice snippet. Nice cryptic message. I wonder what happened during her missing 2 hours.
Now I;m curious about the two hours. LOL
Good snippet.
~Summer
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Intriguing and scary to lose two hours of your life. Excellent excerpt!
Wow! Wonder what he missed...and what the message meant! Great snippet!
Louisa's truth left dangling...is that all that's been remembered? Interesting eight.
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